Poem - Cheat
05.22.08 (1:40 pm) [edit]"Cheat"
Smooth
Supple
Warm breath
Body heat
Dangerous delight
Poison kiss
Tainted
But sweet
Lusciously tender
So wrong
Felt so right
Fingertips
Everywhere
Touching
Denim skirt
Short and tight
Gone now
Devilish red top
Slipped up and away
Nothing left
But us two
Legs twined
Pressure tight
Hands meet chest
Sliding
On sweat
Smooth
Rhythmic
Tasting
Lips
Skin
Risk
Breath
Hot and wet
Coupled with sounds
Pleasure well said
Lips meet
Press
Made one
One evil
Touch
Strong
Vicious delight
Incense burning
Roses wilting
Flowers dying
Sadistic scents
Eyes
Tight shut
Ripped open
Drinking in
No, soaking up
Pure flavor
Fiery taste
Sweet fruit forbidden
Joy
Satisfaction
Morning hits
Memory stings
Guilt kills
Was it worth it?
posted by: risaroodle411 (reply)
post date: 05.22.08 (9:52 am)
this is a really kick ass poem
posted by: rmv7213 (reply)
post date: 05.22.08 (9:57 am)
Reply to: risaroodle411
:) Thank you. I really put a lot into this one.
posted by: GinRummy (reply)
post date: 05.22.08 (11:21 am)
I say yes!
Worth it like hell
posted by: rmv7213 (reply)
post date: 05.22.08 (11:24 am)
Reply to: GinRummy
haha! you're the first person who has actually answered that finishing question, lol.
thank you for the comment :)
posted by: barnabus1 (reply)
post date: 05.22.08 (12:05 pm)
A little self-gratification...probably not worth it in the long run.
posted by: squirrelzone (reply)
post date: 05.22.08 (12:06 pm)
Made all my naughty areas tingle with excitement. Probably not what you're looking for but true none the less.
posted by: rmv7213 (reply)
post date: 05.22.08 (12:52 pm)
Reply to: squirrelzone
haha, well that does tell me that it got a message across :) ha
posted by: mimi (reply)
post date: 05.22.08 (3:22 pm)
intriguing! is this a specific "type" of poetry..cadence or such...like haiku only a different style or just your work? i agree with squirrelzone..makes your naughty areas tingle : ) xoxox
posted by: rmv7213 (reply)
post date: 05.22.08 (4:57 pm)
Reply to: mimi
haha, well, thank you. I have no idea about any style of poetry really, i just sat down and wrote this one :)
I'm glad you tingle too, ha